LINGUISTICS & CULTURE
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Fran and Josi,
Thanks a lot for the help. I'll incorporate your suggestions.
Fran, about the sentence you crossed out: the original idea was to explain that I performed a brief theoretical review on the literature of Balanced Scorecard. This is, in fact, one of the sections of the paper. But I guess the idea didn't get across as expected, right? I changed the sentence to the following:
In order to achieve this, a brief theoretical review about BSC is carried out.
Does that make more sense?
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