LINGUISTICS & CULTURE
|Data:||01/AGO/2007 10:47 PM|
Still unconvinced, I would go with my article 2 and 3 from above (my prior post).
I will transcript here.
From the *nineties, with the increasing competitiveness among *organizations......
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A post script: You could replace among for amid in both cases (plural or singular ORGANIZATION/ORGANIZATIONS without losing meaning.
Post-post script: You could companies/conglomerates/corporations in place of organizations. Could use even firms or organizations, nothing wrong with that, the thing is, if you can use a more accurate word, plus, you could avoid repeat ORGANIZATIONS (one use in line 1 and repetition on line 2 and the related term "organizational" some lines after), thus the proofreader could think that you got a 'organizational' obssession.
Of course, it is in my layman and uneducated view. Some more corroborating or coments on the opposite direction is need.
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