LINGUISTICS & CULTURE
|Data:||10/SET/2009 12:18 AM|
She makes part of a dance crew that is getting prepared to present herself next Saturday in a festival.
1) Makes part of - ?? I don't think so ... how about .. She takes part in / She is part of
2) The dance crew will present "itself"
3) Getting ready sounds more natural than "prepared" too (or otherwise just say "that is preparing to..")
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