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Autor:  orlando
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Data:  18/OUT/2009 10:29 AM
Assunto:  wordy X concise - good short essay
 
Mensagem: 
One more version.

Deivis' version:

There are countless reasons for entering a college or university. One might say that a paper-made diploma does not make much of a difference as far as the job market goes these days. However, just by virtue of having a major one can benefit tremendously in life.

My version:(Tiago T.)

People have different reasons to enter college or university. Some say paper diplomas are not a differential in the job market, but having a major can surely bring benefits to one's life.

My version: (orlando)

There are countless reasons for entering a college or university. One might say that some paper-made diplomas don't t make much of a difference for many types of jobs, as far as the job market goes these days. However, a diploma  from a prestigious well-known university surely will make a positive impact on your professional and personal life.


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Would this be a good short essay in your opinion?  –  Deivis  16/OUT/2009, 6:47 PM
Would this be a good short essay in your opinion?  –  pat  16/OUT/2009, 7:55 PM
Would this be a good short essay in your opinion?  –  Deivis  16/OUT/2009, 11:03 PM
Would this be a good short essay in your opinion?  –  pat  17/OUT/2009, 10:56 AM
Would this be a good short essay in your opinion?  –  MC  17/OUT/2009, 12:44 PM
wordy X concise - good short essay  –  mc  17/OUT/2009, 12:49 PM
wordy X concise - good short essay  –  Deivis  17/OUT/2009, 4:08 PM
wordy X concise - good short essay  –  dale-cr  17/OUT/2009, 11:14 PM
wordy X concise - good short essay  –  Tiago T.  18/OUT/2009, 2:37 AM
wordy X concise - good short essay  –  pat  18/OUT/2009, 9:19 AM
 wordy X concise - good short essay  –  orlando  18/OUT/2009, 10:29 AM
wordy X concise - good short essay  –  dale-cr  18/OUT/2009, 12:18 PM
wordy X concise - good short essay  –  orlando  18/OUT/2009, 1:07 PM
wordy X concise - good short essay  –  dale=cr  18/OUT/2009, 9:11 PM

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