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Autor:  eddie
E-mail:  não-disponível
Data:  03/MAI/2010 11:24 AM
Assunto:  What do you think about death penalty?
 
Mensagem: 
Like Sidney has said, it's good to be careful about some subjects.There's no
problem in talking about 'death penalty', the problem is that some people don't 
like to talk about it.But I think you just wanted to practice your English.
Jefferson, in my opinion your writing skill is very good and it's pleasant to read.

In the passage "I read a new about..." you shoud have written "I read some news about...".Note that when you mean 'information about something' you always say 'news'.
Instead of saying "3 child" you must say "3 children" in the plural.And finally, I think it sounds better if you say  "I want to know what you think..." but what you wrote is grammatically correct too.As you can see these are only minor mistakes that you're probably already aware of it.  


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What do you think about death penalty?  –  Jefferson Leandro  01/MAI/2010, 12:23 PM
What do you think about death penalty?  –  Sidney  03/MAI/2010, 9:45 AM
 What do you think about death penalty?  –  eddie  03/MAI/2010, 11:24 AM
What do you think about death penalty?  –  orlando  03/MAI/2010, 2:35 PM
What do you think about death penalty?  –  Jefferson Leandro  03/MAI/2010, 4:12 PM
What do you think about death penalty?  –  Dale-USA  03/MAI/2010, 6:37 PM

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