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Autor:  Deivis
E-mail:  deivis_fsilva@yahoo.com.br
Data:  27/ABR/2006 5:41 AM
Assunto:  Correction.
 
Mensagem: 

A friend of mine asked me to proofread the following e-mail yesterday. Could you guys take a look at my version of it and point out any possible mistakes in it?

 

Thanks in advance.

 

 

 

 

Hi, Deivis !

 

 

Could you correct my mistakes ?

 

 

 

Alunos vão bem em prova e professor beija porco

 

 

O professor Randy Garrier, da cidade de Garden City, Estado do Kansas, nos EUA, prometeu a seus alunos da quarta série que, se eles esforçassem e conseguissem acertar mais de 80% das perguntas em um teste de matemática, beijaria um porco.

Os alunos, diante da estranha aposta, estudaram bastante e conseguiram cumprir a tarefa. Na terça-feira Garrier, usando batom vermelho, beijou o porco diante dos estudantes.

 

 

Pupils go well in test and professor kisses pig .

 

 

Professor Randy Garrier, of the city of Garden City, State of

the Kansas, in U.S.A., promised its pupils of the fourth series that, if they strengtove and obtained to more than make right 80% of the questions in a mathematics test, would kiss a pig. The pupils, ahead of the appositive stranger, had studied sufficiently and obtained to fulfill the task. In the Garrier tuesday, using red lipstick, ahead kissed the pig of the students.

 

My version:

 

 Teacher Randy Garrier from the city of Ganden City, State of Kansas, US; promissed his pupils from the fourth grade that if they strugled themselves enough to get more than 80% questions of a math test correct, he'd kiss a pig.

 Over that very odd bet the students studied a lot and fulfilled the task. On Thuesday, with a red lipstick on, Garrier kissed the pig.

 


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 Correction.  –  Deivis  27/ABR/2006, 5:41 AM
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