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Autor:  Deivis
E-mail:  deivis_fsilva@yahoo.com.br
Data:  29/ABR/2006 9:53 AM
Assunto:  Composition

I made a composition and just want to know if it makes sense to you guys


Take a look:


        It's very dificult for people who come from a poor family to attend university in Brazil nowadays, whether due to their economics status or their lack of basic knowledge to pass in "vestibular" and follow the other students. The stark thuth is that the majority of people who go to a good colleges are those who the parents could afford a good basic education since they were in kinderganden; what puts them on the cutting edge over the others aplicants when disputing a vacancy in a  public universiy. 

       However some unfortunate people, undetered by their poor means, enroll themselves in a bunch of private universities spread all over us and work their socks off to keep themselves in this institutions that the main goal is to get as much money as possible out of the the current panorama of the education system in Brazil. In most cases, by putting all their incomes on their studies they have to go through a lot of economic plight to get it finished. Their inner strength enable them to prevail over their live's obstacle, though. They go against the odds to make their dreams come true because they know that just those who do not try are the losers






(fell free to proofread it)

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 Composition  –  Deivis  29/ABR/2006, 9:53 AM
Composition  –  JOhannes  29/ABR/2006, 11:12 AM

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