LINGUISTICS & CULTURE
|Data:||16/ABR/2008 9:37 PM|
|Assunto:||A cockpit too many word choice question|
a) "... and while the cockpit appeared small in comparison to most allied fighters, the cockpit appeared well laid out."
b) "... and while small in comparison to most allied fighters, the cockpit appeared well laid out."
I see nothing wrong with either text. The first conveys the idea that the cockpit has the appearance of being small and is not. The second affirms that the cockpit is in fact small.
So I think it is up to the author to decide what he really wants to convey...
Is it ok?
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