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This monograph tries to show the reality of a current and polemical topic in Brazil: adoption by homosexual couples. To a better understanding of the topic, first, there is a brief historical concerning the evolution of family patterns. The changes that happened in the Brazilian family are discussed, showing the new existent patterns nowadays.
In the following chapter,the acceptance to the homosexual union is shown up in the international scenery and in Brazilian juridical system, besides there is also a brief study of the prejudice with regard to the homosexual in the course of the history, with approach in the equality principle. It discusses the adoption problem in Brazil, as well as its requirements and purpose, that is to assure the child and adolescent’s right to the family and community environments.
In the last chapter, the core of this monograph is reached, the adoption by homosexual couples. First, it tries to discuss the problem that has permeated most of the adoptions by homosexuals in Brazil: when a homosexual couple wants to adopt, one of the homosexuals has to be chosen in order to formalize the petition for adoption, but, in the practice, both finish educating and raising together this child. It becomes evident that the bond between the child and the partner of his adopter doesn’t find a proper juridical custody that preserves the best interests of the minor. Also, the legal possibility is seen of homosexual couples coming to jointly adopt, presenting studies about adoption’s psychological viability by these pairs and giving an account of the first favorable judicial decisions to adoption by them.
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