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Autor:  Sandro Vadlyn
E-mail:  sandrovadlyn@hotmail.com
Data:  10/JUN/2009 12:50 AM
Assunto:  Frase
Mensagem:  Our doubts are betraying and make us lose what we, otherwise could win.

Paulo, as a friend I must say that that sentence doesn't make much sense to me.

"Our doubts are betraying...." doesn't sound idiomatic for one. And "doubts are betraying...." Who? Transitive verb here.

"betraying" and "make" really don't go well together. Either you say both in the -ing form or in the plural form, otherwise it just won't flow.

And what in the world is that comma doing over there? lol

Please feel free to comment on my "rightings" as well.

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 English Made in Brazil -- English, Portuguese, & contrastive linguistics
Frase  –  Carla B.  09/JUN/2009, 9:47 PM
Frase  –  Dale-CR  09/JUN/2009, 10:01 PM
Frase  –  Sandro Vadlyn  09/JUN/2009, 10:36 PM
Frase  –  PPAULO  09/JUN/2009, 11:09 PM
Frase  –  Dale-CR  10/JUN/2009, 12:01 AM
 Frase  –  Sandro Vadlyn  10/JUN/2009, 12:50 AM
Frase  –  Oicram_Sairaf  10/JUN/2009, 1:59 AM
Frase  –  PPAULO  10/JUN/2009, 2:44 AM
to Carla - Frase "de Shakespeare"  –  Fran  10/JUN/2009, 4:55 AM
Frase  –  Fran  10/JUN/2009, 5:15 AM
Frase  –  pat  10/JUN/2009, 1:14 PM
Frase  –  Fran  10/JUN/2009, 1:34 PM
Frase  –  Carla B.  10/JUN/2009, 9:52 PM
Frase  –  PPAULO  10/JUN/2009, 10:43 PM
Frase  –  Prova X(i)  11/JUN/2009, 10:23 PM

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