LINGUISTICS & CULTURE
|Data:||18/OUT/2009 10:29 AM|
|Assunto:||wordy X concise - good short essay|
One more version.
There are countless reasons for entering a college or university. One might say that a paper-made diploma does not make much of a difference as far as the job market goes these days. However, just by virtue of having a major one can benefit tremendously in life.
My version:(Tiago T.)
People have different reasons to enter college or university. Some say paper diplomas are not a differential in the job market, but having a major can surely bring benefits to one's life.
My version: (orlando)
There are countless reasons for entering a college or university. One might say that some paper-made diplomas don't t make much of a difference for many types of jobs, as far as the job market goes these days. However, a diploma from a prestigious well-known university surely will make a positive impact on your professional and personal life.
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