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PORTUGUESE LINGUISTICS & CULTURE |
Autor: | PPAULO |
E-mail: | não-disponível |
Data: | 12/JUL/2010 3:37 AM |
Assunto: | Tradução |
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Here are my comments, but I may have missed (or misunderstood something, so it´s not fail-proof. ++++++++++++++++ ...of low income families... (the kids themselves aren´t in the job market; I suppose...) ...in THE cited shelter/place...or among these students (since you said that they were "escolares, before) ...kids prefference of meals/favorite menu of the target group etc.... (or other words, but not food preferences of school, school can´t be personified here. It is not a person.)
...the favoured food options in the institution/(instead of shelter, here just for variaty´s sake) OR
...Without broadcasting controls, the marketing in the media have an influence of food choices and contribute to a unbalanced diet. Yet, the feasibility of a nutrition education directed at school can encourage the practice of good eating habits. |